<p>Hi. I've written two essays, and I'm trying to one to use for the common app. Would anyone like to help me by reading them? I will PM them to you. You do not need to note any constructive criticisms. All I need to know is which one do you think is better. Thanks</p>
<p>Actually, since I’m a new member. I can’t PM, so leave your email address please.</p>
<p>bump…</p>