<p>Hi,</p>
<p>I recently finished writing my college essay and I have no idea how to shorten it.</p>
<p>I'm at 893/500 words.</p>
<p>If anyone would be willing to read and help me out (and of course if the story is interesting, does it flow, etc.) I would be very grateful.</p>
<p>Let me know and I'll pm it. It's on my experience working in the DAV Team as a coder. (If you google DAV Team or Khaos on ifans, you'll find us. It's a true story with must of the references relating to the threads posted on ifans.)</p>
<p>Thanks!</p>