<p>Hello everybody!
This is my first post with many more to come in the future. I hope that this will be a good experience here at this forum!</p>
<p>Currently I am done with the first essay of an essay I am writing for a scholarship, so I was wondering if anyone had the time to help me critique my essay. I just need someone who can really help me. </p>
<p>The topic for the essay was "Think about a situation in which you were a leader, either by your initiative, creativity, or courage. How did you display your leadership skills? In what particular way or ways were you successful? What, if anything, might you have done better? What did you learn from the experience? "</p>
<p>Please and thank you!</p>