need help with college essay ! :)

<p>I am about to be a senior in high school this comming school year. I have started to write a potential college essay to use as option 6 on the common app. aplication. I don't think that i've done anything extrememly remarkable or had a defining moment in my life to write about, so i wrote about something lighter. Would anyone, preferably a parent or someone not in high school be willing to read what i have to far?</p>

<p>i will email it if anyone wants to :)</p>