Need help with essay - fairly personal

<p>About my relationship with a sibling. I really need some criticism! Anyone?</p>

<p>I’ll take a look. PM me.</p>

<p>sure! id love to</p>

<p>Anyone else, please?</p>

<p>pm me ill take a glance</p>

<p>Feel free to send it.</p>

<p>well its college confidential, personal essays are personal, please do send it</p>

<p>sure pm it :))</p>