Need help with essays!!

Colleges and Universities A-Z Princeton University
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<p>anyone care to read my MIT essay? .... I think it's terrible and I have like a few hours to fix it and upload!!!</p>

<p>Just let me know so I can PM. :-)</p>

<p>BTW I know this is NOT the MIT forum, but i love this forum :)</p>

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<p>We understand perfectly. I'll look at it.</p>

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<p>This is home, mercury. Lay your fears to rest. Yeah, send it my way too. If you do it quickly enough I'll be able to read it before I head out.</p>

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<p>hey will someone read mine? thanks</p>

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<p>Yeah, if you two PM them to me I'll read 'em.</p>

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<p>ill read em too, PM me, if u want to</p>

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<p>Wow! Actually I'm making some major changes to it right now :) Will PM it to you guys once I get done (maybe an hour).</p>

<p>This forum is amazing :)</p>

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<p>i'd love to read it as well!</p>

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<p>OK I just rewrote it, and now it's super long (885 :( )</p>

<p>though it's long I think the simple, conversational language will make it passable?
if there's anyone who has the time and guts to read an 885 word essay, please let me know :) I got ~30 min before my net account runs out!! :eek:</p>

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<p>Yeah, I'll do it! Just PM it to me.</p>

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<p>hey don't worry...mine was really long too (same as yours about) and it fit on one page on the common app sheet...it didnt look THAT long (to me, at least) when I print previewed it. I did the common app though, so I guess it depends on your application.</p>

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<p>common app at MIT??</p>

<p>and sorry entropicgirl :( I didnt realize you posted a response until i logged back on... are you still online?</p>

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<p>omg sorry... i'm mixing things up here :( it's 5:30 in the morning and i've been up all night writing my essays...</p>

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<p>oh, I'm not applying to MIT....just for the regular common app schools (duke, h-vard, etc)</p>

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<p>Mercury, don't kill yourself, man. hehe. I'm not sure of the time frame right now (CC time throws me off all the time), but if you still need someone to look at your essay...yeah, just hit me up.</p>

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<p>if you want, feel free to pm me</p>

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<p>Thanks a lot everyone for offering to help!! I already submitted my app though :)</p>