Need help with flow in my essay - Can anyone help?

College Essays
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<p>Hello, I believe my essay needs some help with flow, however I am in need of some help. Is anyone willing to help me?</p>

<p>Thanks in advance.</p>

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<p>Yes, I may be able to help. Hit me up =O)</p>

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<p>thanks, anyone else?</p>