need help with HYPS and Dartmouth essay

<p>it is for the common app, #6 (make your own)</p>

<p>i think it might be good, but im not very objective when it comes to personal, subjective matters. besides, ive scrapped many ideas so far, so another wouldnt put too big of a dent in the task.</p>

<p>will anybody read it and help me out?</p>

<p>I'd be happy to help!</p>

<p>Hey, I'll take a look at it! Just PM me.</p>

<p>i'd be happy to look at it if you PM it to me</p>

<p>i can read it</p>

<p>ill be more than happy to help :)
just PM me</p>

<p>I will be happy to read your essay and critque. Please, email it to <a href="mailto:CTarantine@aol.com">CTarantine@aol.com</a></p>

<p>suree i'd be happy to read it =)</p>

<p>PM it to me. we're proofreading college essays in english class actually :)</p>

<p>I don't mind</p>

<p>Again, I'd be happy to help...just send it in a PM.</p>

<p>PM me and I'll give u my email</p>

<p>pm me ill read it</p>

<p>I'll be happy to read and critique. PM and I'll supply e-mail.</p>

<p>ME ME!</p>

<p><a href="mailto:missalinak@hotmail.com">missalinak@hotmail.com</a></p>

<p>id be happy to comment and review your essay. my email is <a href="mailto:auxsoleil@gmail.com">auxsoleil@gmail.com</a></p>

<p><a href="mailto:apexeffect@gmail.com">apexeffect@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>My essay writing got me into LEAD with a crappy GPA, :D hahahah so i might be able to help.</p>

<p>email: <a href="mailto:sanjeetkd8@gmail.com">sanjeetkd8@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>I'll read it!</p>

<p>(I'm not interested in applying to Harvard, Princeton, or Yale --- so no competition there.)</p>

<p>You guys should just give up posting, s/he's not sending it to anybody...</p>