<p>I need help with one of my essays for carnegie mellon that is due tomorrow, so would any mind reading it? I need a harsh critique pleaseeee.</p>
<p>please??? anyone? thank you!!</p>
<p>I’m a 2014-er, but I’m NOT applying to Carnegie Mellon, and I really love editing essays for people. If you’d like me to look at your paper, you can send it to me at <a href="mailto:cwild2458@gmail.com">cwild2458@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>i did 
thankk youu!1
anyone else? I would like more than one opinion thankk you!</p>
<p>anyone please?</p>
<p>rayaz I’m waiting for someone to critique mine, so I have some time.
PM it over</p>