<p>My essay writing thought process died after i applied early to Yale and Michigan. Now I need to get back in the groove, so please help me on this essay if you have time or the means to do so.</p>
<p>It is very rough, and I need some good criticism.</p>
<p>bump…</p>
<p>hey, im a nice guy 
…still need help though :(</p>
<p>i finished my college apps luckily, and im glad people helped me proofread on here. so i guess ill return the favor. expect me to be done 2 days after you send it to me at the latest.</p>