Need help with statement of purpose

<p>I need help with my statement of purpose. Its way too long, I am not sure what to curtail.
It also need to be checked for the flow, and readability.</p>

<p>Any volunteers?</p>

<p>I would really appreciate any help on this.</p>

<p>And I read the forums, you guys are really doing wonderful job. Kudos.</p>