Need Help

Colleges and Universities A-Z University of Pennsylvania
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Hey guys!

I just finished drafting my essay when I realized that the question was kind of confusing.

When they say "How will you explore your intellectual and academic interests at the University of Pennsylvania? Please answer this question given the specific undergraduate school to which you are applying. (400-650 words) ", Do they want us to write only about the stuff you’ll involve yourself in and opportunities you;ll gain through Penn?

I spent the first half of my essay writing about why I want to study my choice of major, my experience in the field - conveying my qualities, achievements and why Penn needs a student like me. The second half of my essay is about what i want to do in life and how a penn education will be instrumental in making me achieve those goals/aspirations.

I brought in selective stuff in the second half like professors, research opportunities and other Penn related things.
Am I on the right track or am I screwed?

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Hopefully this helps: http://www.page217.org/penn-specific-essay-2017-2018/

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Yeah I’ve mentioned all of these. What im scared about is the fact that instead of talking about penn throughout, I’ve sort of split it into two halves and then brought about the connect. I’ll probably introduce links in between to make it sound more appealing.

If you’re a parent or current student, could you evaluate mine?

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I was accepted to Wharton ED this fall so if you want you can PM me and I’ll help you with what I can.

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That’s how I set mine up, and I got accepted ED. Good luck!