need honest criticism

<p>I have been killing myself over if my essay is appropriate. Can someone please read to give me your thoughts?</p>

<p>Sure thing. PM me or send it to <a href="mailto:cwild2458@gmail.com">cwild2458@gmail.com</a>
Don’t worry, I love editing, and I’ll give you all the help I possibly can</p>

<p>i will def help u if u would be willing to tear apart my essay, nobody ever actually gives criticism </p>

<p>pm me!</p>

<p>i tear apart essays lol</p>

<p><a href="mailto:ironicallyunsure@gmail.com">ironicallyunsure@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>pm it over and i can try to help</p>