<p>Hey guys, I need some input on my 2 200 word transfer essays. They fill the major and open ended criteria. Looking for grammar, ideas, comments, all ideas are welcome! Deadline is coming up and I need some help perfecting them, thanks a bunch. I'll PM you if you're interested.</p>
<p>I am interested! I have lots of time while I procrastinate on mine! You have to promise to help me too though!</p>
<p>I'll read it! PM me!</p>
<p>PM me...I'm an exceptional writer.</p>
<p>i will read it. dont send to iwanna ivy.</p>
<p>If u want, I can revise it for u...</p>
<p>"i will read it. dont send to iwanna ivy."</p>
<p>Does my contrasting views to your own, make me incapable of doing a peer review?</p>
<p>LOL @ Sandkick's comment!!!</p>
<p>LOL @ IWannaIvy's reponse!!!</p>
<p>Update guys, I've just about wrapped up the personal statement #2, the 600 word one. Thanks to all those who have contributed to the 200 ones, I'll send you guys the 600 one as well. Would anyone else like to critique, revise, comment on my statements, it would be greatly appreciated. Thanks!</p>
<p>Anyone else interested, I'm planning to make the final revisions and submiting the app tonight, so last minute suggestions are welcome. Thanks again.</p>
<p>your essays look strong. Very well descriptive. I am not a great writer so that is all the comments i can really offer. Goodluck with your admissions.</p>
<p>I will help you revise :)</p>
<p>Don't trust anyone but me!</p>
<p>Best writer ever...</p>
<p>Ill help you out. send me pm</p>