need objectivity-please!!

<p>Hi,</p>

<p>I'm applying to conn as a transfer student for this semester. I had a great visit and am really interested in conn! I am finishing up my essays and was wondering if any current conn student or applicants would feel comfortable reading my essay? I know the essays will be an important factor in admission, so I want them to be as good as humanly possible! I would really appreciate some objective advice!! thanks:-)</p>

<p>sure I will read it!</p>