Need opinion on essay please!

<p>Please PM me and I'll email it to you! Thank you very much!</p>

<p>This one's for Yale, It's about how I discover the real reason for performing music - Not for personal glory, but to share music and joy with others.</p>

<p>i'll trade with you if you'd like, mines not done i just need an opinion on it though .</p>

<p>Sure, I'd be willing</p>

<p>PM me, I'll try to help.</p>

<p>Thankssssss</p>

<p>pm me if you don't mind i'm a harsh editor</p>