Hi, I was wondering if anyone could read some of my essays and tell me what you think of it. I am having some trouble coming up with a creative way to open up my “Why x college” essays (note that I’m an international applicant so I don’t have any nice stories to tell from campus tours). Any input would be greatly appreciated!
Hey 
I’d love to help you with that!
And you sure do not need campus tours to tell nice stories!
oh, thanks! i’ve already sent these (literally just submitted my last app) but i could PM you some of them!
You’re welcome. That would be great!