<p>Hi,</p>
<p>I have written my College essay for one of my english class's. My teach likes it and thinks i should use it for the Common Ap. However, my parents dont think it shows enough about me. I need advice! Will anyone one read it?</p>
<p>Yea send it over!</p>
<p>I’d love to give it a read, send it over.</p>
<p>Yup,sure, PM it and i’ll critique it for u.</p>