Need outside opinion on intended "Additional Circumstances" section of common app

Colleges and Universities A-Z Harvard University
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I’m a transfer applicant, and the deadline is upcoming on March 1st.

While I’m not really expecting much out of applying to transfer to Harvard College, there is a section I had prepared for the additional circumstances section, that I’m now seriously considering about whether or not to submit it.

If anyone would be willing to read it and give their honest opinion about the appropriateness of the subject matter (not about whether or not this will “help me get in”, but if it should be included at all on my common application to multiple colleges), I would greatly appreciate it.

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Wow, Harvard only takes about 12 transfers a year. There is nothing you could say in the additional info to help you, it will already be decided on other factors.

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i am willing to review and offer feedback.

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@BrownParent What was the point of your comment? I was pretty explicit that I was trying to discern if it was appropriate at all (I’m not only applying to Harvard), rather than “would it get me in” – I already acknowledged your sentiment in the second sentence of my OP.

@VSGPeanut101 Thank you, I’ll PM you right now.