Need Parental Help for a risky essay

<p>Okay, I started writing my essay, but I've been told it may be risky for adcom's because its slighty too "provocative" for adults. I need your (parents) opinions to see if I should keep it and continue finishing it or stray paths.</p>

<p>Please pm me!!! I need to get this essay done.</p>

<p>31 views...anybody :?</p>

<p>Free up some PM space, parikhs.</p>

<p>whoops sorry...cleaned up...anyone who tried PMing me previously please pm me again</p>