Need posters to critique an essay; new posters don't bother

<p>I realize that it's a bit hypocritical for me to ask that new posters or those with low post counts to not post on this thread, but I would prefer criticisms from more established members. </p>

<p>Anyways, EDing Columbia, post here and I'll PM you.</p>

<p>Bump. 10char</p>

<p>I’ll read it. However, I’m also applying to Columbia (albeit not ED) so it’s perfectly understandable if you don’t want to send it.</p>

<p>I’m not applying to Columbia, although I’m not sure if you would classify me as a new member or not. Send it to me if you like.</p>

<p>Sent it to you both, and thanks in advance for critiquing it.</p>

<p>Anyone else willing to read please post.</p>

<p>PM it over! I’m already in college!</p>

<p>Although I am a new member I am not new to editing essays. If you PM I will review for content and grammar.</p>

<p>I’ll read. PM it over</p>

<p>Sent it to you all. </p>

<p>Any other readers, please post here.</p>

<p>Bump, still need more readers.</p>

<p>I’ll read it.</p>

<p>I’ll also read it if you still need more.</p>

<p>I can read it and give you some feedback.</p>

<p>In the midst of some major editing, I’ll send it to you guys soon.</p>

<p>When your done leave a reply here?
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Thanks.</p>

<p>I’ll critique your essay if you want. :)</p>