<p>Unsatisfied with my essay, I came up with a similar alternative that I am not sure is any better. It's really rough (wrote it at 2am) and I need to know if compared to my previous essay if it's worth cleaning up. Ask me to send you both of my essays or just the new one (if you have reviewed my old one on here already). Thanks!!</p>
<p>I’ll return the favor…</p>
<p>I did the same thing! Still not happy with either though, but I’ll help if you need it. Pm them both and I’ll tell you which one I liked better :)</p>
<p>I’d be glad to help. Just shoot me a PM of both.</p>
<p>I’ll look at it.</p>
<p>I’ll read it</p>
<p><strong><em>bump</em></strong></p>
<p>I’ll read both!</p>
<p>I’ll read it. I tried PMing you but your box is full.</p>
<p><strong><em>bump</em></strong></p>