<p>Hey guys, I was wondering if anyone would be willing to look at an essay that I wrote? It's not really a college essay, but it's quite similar to one. It's to get into a Research Internship Summer Program, but the program itself is very competitive so I need a good essay to get into the program.</p>
<p>Anyone care to look over it? I would really really appreciate. Thanks so much in advance ! =]</p>
<p>sure, i'll take a look at it- pm me</p>
<p>pm me eewewew</p>
<p>PMs Sent.</p>
<p>Thanks a lot guys. Really really appreciate it. Please leave me feedback as soon as possible, cuz I was hoping to turn this in tomorrow morning before school starts. All criticism appreciated. Thanks. =]</p>
<p>what program are u applying to?</p>
<p>I can look over it as well if you need more advice.</p>
<p>Lalala, I'm applying to Feinstein Institute's Summer Intern Research Program. The webpage describing the program can be found here. </p>
<p>Thanks a lot skp, I sent you a PM.</p>
<p>(PS: I got your message unccharlotte, but I can't see the whole PM. I only see like a line, and then a "..." Am I doing something wrong? Why can't I see the whole message?)</p>
<p>md4me, unccharlotte, skp, can you guys leave me an alternative method to contact you? Maybe e-mail or AIM screenname?
For some reason, I can't PM my whole essay to you.</p>
<p>ooo that program is extreeeeeemely competitive, i know i tried to get in last yr and didnt. However, i got into the New York Academy of Sciences Summer Research Program instead.</p>
<p>Really? What was your GPA? How good was your essay, etc. And did you have a strong letter of recommendation? I really hope I get into this program.</p>
<p>when's the deadline? i'll review.</p>
<p>Hey blairt, well I actually have to hand it in tomorrow. I can send it regardless, but I don't know how much it'll help. Let me know if you still want to check it out. Thanks so much regardless.</p>