Need some eyes for my UC Transfer Personal Statement :)

College Essays
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Hi! It’s crunch time and I was hoping to get some feedback on my prompt #1 response. I’m grateful for any commentary and willing to share my thoughts on anyone else who needs some input :slight_smile:

Here’s a link to the google doc-
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1liRMPH_SRKX-vOcmkrDulvVWZT7pZpLHpLzW7wPKHFY/edit?usp=sharing

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Actually I’ve seemed to run into a problem with the link

Please copy and paste and delete the space after “docs”
https://docs .google.com/document/d/1liRMPH_SRKX-vOcmkrDulvVWZT7pZpLHpLzW7wPKHFY/edit?usp=sharing

Thanks again!