Need some help

<p>I just finished my first draft of my common app long essay and was wondering if anyone wanted to read it ....</p>

<p>please be as brutally honest as possible......</p>

<p>colleges im aplying to
1. Rice
2. Williams
3. Yale
4. WUSTL
5. Smith colege
6. Bryn Mawr
7. Notre Dame
8.Vanderbilt</p>

<p>thanks a bunch!</p>

<p>pm me 100char</p>

<p>I'll read it if you'd like!</p>

<p>I'd really like to take a look. Just PM it down!</p>

<p>send. I wil be brutally honest
email:<a href="mailto:sainanduri@gmail.com">sainanduri@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>PM it to me and I could give you some good, honest feedback.</p>

<p>anyone else?</p>

<p>I'd be glad to help out. Just PM me your essay. I know I'm a new member, but don't worry: I'm not hunting down essays to plaigarize (I looked at the advice for posting essays :) ).</p>

<p>Pm me (10 char)</p>

<p>i would love to read it as well! and i don't steal ideas. : )</p>

<p>PM me if you want!!</p>

<p>Sure, I'll take a look. I am an 08'er though, but not applying to any of your schools.</p>

<p>I'll take a look. PM me.</p>

<p>I'll be glad to take a look! P'm me.</p>

<p>Pm me. I will do my best to help you.</p>

<p>Pm me if you want more opinions!</p>

<p>i'm up for it if u want :)</p>

<p>edit: okay nevermind, i just realized that it's probably the best if i don't read this since i want to apply to one of the schools on your list too :P
hehehe but goodluck!</p>