Need someone to look at my transfer essay

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<p>I have a 300 word transfer essay that I'd like for someone to look at, if possible. Harsh criticism is very welcome.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance!</p>

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<p>sure, ill give some advice</p>

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<p>I want to read, send me ur essay.</p>

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<p>Yea bro I can help too! :)</p>

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<p>I want to read, send me ur essay.</p>