Need someone to proof my 2 Texas Common App essays

Applying to College
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<p>These are the 2 essays I'll send to all the schools I apply to in texas with minor revisions. The two prompts are:</p>

<p>1.) Describe a significant setback, challenge or opportunity in your life and the impact that it has had on you. </p>

<p>2.) Many students expand their view of the world during their time in college. Such growth often results from encounters between students who have lived different cultural, economic, or academic experiences. With your future growth in mind, describe a potential classmate that you believe you could learn from either within or outside a formal classroom environment.</p>

<p>I think my first essay is really good and my second one, so far, is really bad. I someone would be so kind to let me PM it and read over it for me, I'd be really grateful.</p>

<p>Thanks in advance.</p>

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<p>i'll look them over, about to go to sleep so might respond tmrw</p>

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<p>ill have a go with them, pm me!</p>

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<p>i'll give em a look</p>

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<p>Sent.</p>

<p>Thanks a lot for your help.</p>

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<p>Sent to givlupi. Thanks again.</p>

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<p>Does anyone seriously write a good essay for the second prompt? It is a bad question if you ask me. I'll proofread your essays if you want another opinion... I wrote the same two prompts for UT already.</p>

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<p>Ok send it</p>

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<p>I already sent these into Texas A&M and got in, so I can look them over if you want. PM me!</p>