Needs honest opinion on COLUMBIA ED '14 essay!!

Colleges and Universities A-Z Columbia University
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<p>Hey, anyone willing to check over my ED essay and give me suggestions? Just tell me if you like the theme, any suggestions, etc. =] thanks</p>

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<p>You can PM me</p>

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<p>I’d be glad to oblige :)</p>

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<p>Interested. PM me?</p>

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<p>thanks any more?</p>

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<p>You can pm me if you want.</p>

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<p>I’m up for reading it, but I’m ED 2014 too so it’s fine if you don’t want me to… i already submitted my application though so its not like i could change anything haha =) pm me if you’d like</p>

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<p>Sent. more opinions the better!</p>

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<p>i already submitted my application too… if you need some opinions and possible suggestions for mechanics/style i can try to help. pm me if you wish to</p>