Neeed essay critiqued

[Wowie]

<p>need essay critiqued and cut down!!</p>

<p>willing to trade!</p>

[smileypeace]

<p>lets trade</p>

[shimmshaw]

<p>I’ll trade you :)</p>

[Masterus2010]

<p>Swap me. Message with prompt, number of words, and number target.</p>

<p>I’ll do the same</p>