nervous and having second thoughts about personal statement..help!?

College Essays
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<p>Anyone want to read it for me? This is my second edition.
It involves my foreign exchange, as it is what I truly feel defines me best.</p>

<p>It's for a very prestigious university, so criticism or just general reactions are welcome :)</p>

<p>I wanted to submit tonight for a January 1 deadline, but decided otherwise.</p>

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<p>Sure. PM Me</p>

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<p>I'll read it.</p>

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<p>Any other takers?
I changed some stuff around.
It's for Brown btw.</p>

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<p>I can.... 10chars</p>

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<p>i'll read it... pm please</p>

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<p>Oh, I did a foregin exchange as well (though my essay isn't on that) I would love to take a look! =)</p>