<p>Hey guys! I've really been stressing about this essay, but I actually think I've found the one that I'm confident about and am definitely going to use for Yale. Could anyone please read it and critique for me? Be brutal!</p>
<p>I can take a look at it and give feedback</p>
<p>I can take a look at it if you want. I'm applying early too but I've already submitted my application. I'll be pretty blunt and brutally honest though.</p>
<p>I can take a look too.</p>
<p>hey, i'll be happy to do some peer editing :)...just pm the essay!</p>
<p>I could take a look at it.. pm me if you want me to take a stab at it</p>
<p>sure just send it to me</p>
<p>I would like to have a look and provide some feedback. PM me whenever you want!</p>
<p>I will certainly be brutal. ;] PM me.</p>