newborn to OB-GYN!

<p>i need help! :( personal statement
is this a good start & how can i make it flow with the rest of my essay?
im stuck on what to write next?</p>

<p>Describe the world you come from, for example, your family, community or school, and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</p>

<p>A newborn baby who comes into the world may not know anything, but let’s others decide for them. As they grow older through the cycles of life they learn to think for themselves and learn from their mistakes. As I start to hatch into the real world I have set goals for myself while like any others, my parents keep fantasizing my future. Growing up I didn’t really have a hard life but I always let others make decisions for me as I was shy growing up. Taking baby steps I learned to crawl away from my insecurities and plan my life my way. Proving I don’t need to follow others footsteps, I have the desire to pursue a career as an OB-GYN with my set dreams and goals.</p>

<p>Lets doesn’t have an apostrophe.</p>