Non-traditional student: Read my common app essay?

<p>The title says it all. I took some time off from school (I just turned 29 today) and am applying to a few schools. Would anyone like to read and critique my common app transfer essay?</p>

<p>Thanks.</p>

<p>sure i’ll look at it</p>

<p>PM sent.</p>

<p>I wouldn’t mind taking a look at, CelloDiego. Send it over when you get a chance.</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>Well, I submitted it several months ago. Do you still want to read it?</p>