Decision: Rejected
Applied McCormick, Biomedical Engineering
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2310 (CR: 750, M: 770, W: 790; Essay: 11)
ACT (breakdown): 35 (E: 36, M: 34, R: 34, S: 36; Essay: 11)
SAT II (place score in parentheses): Bio M: 800, Math II: 800, Chemistry: 780
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0
Weighted GPA (out of 5.0): 4.8
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 4/570; Top 1%
AP (place score in parentheses): Human Geography (5), Environmental Science (5), European History (5), Biology (5), Chemistry (5), Psychology (5), U.S. History (5), English Language (5)
Senior Year Course Load: AP U.S. Government, AP Economics, AP English Literature, AP Calculus, AP Physics C, Wind Ensemble
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): National AP Scholar, National Merit Finalist, other smaller awards and recognition
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parentheses): Wind Ensemble (9-12, First Chair Saxophone, Librarian), Marching Band (9-12, Flute Section Leader 10-12), All-State Honor Band (9, 11-12), All-County Honor Band (9-12, First Chair), National Honor Society (12, Project Leader), National English Honor Society (11-12, Vice President), Special Olympics Club (11-12), School Writing Tutor (11-12), School Math Tutor (11-12), HOBY Local Leadership Seminar (10), HOBY World Leadership Congress (10), Gay-Straight Alliance (12), Lab Internship at UCLA (12), Hospital Volunteer (11-12, Student Coordinator/Shift Supervisor), Spring and Summer Music Camp Volunteer (10-12), Vacation Bible School Volunteer (9, 11)
Job/Work Experience: Surgical Assistant at an Oral Surgery Office (Summer between Junior and Senior year)
Volunteer/Community Service: Tutoring, Hospital, Music Camp, Vacation Bible School; 500+ hours, Gold President’s Volunteer Service Award
Summer Activities: Volunteering, Summer Job, Leadership Camps, Marching Band
Essays (rating 1-10, details): Common App (8): represented myself through a symbol and a short anecdote, revealed a lot about me but could’ve been more eloquent; Northwestern Statement (9): I thought it was uniquely written and emphasized the many facets of Northwestern that I found appealing and hoped to take advantage of
Teacher Recommendations (rating 1-10, details): English Teacher (8): didn’t read it but we have a good relationship and she liked me as a student; Biology Teacher (7): was less personal with me as a teacher, but I did exceedingly well in the class and she liked me (I hope)
Counselor Rec (rating 1-10, details): 7, we’re very friendly with each other but I’m sure it wasn’t anything special
Additional Rec (rating 1-10, details): 9, written by my lab mentor; she said she made me sound amazing in her letter
Interview: 8, interviewer and I had a good amount in common and the conversation went on smoothly for as long as the interview could last (they were on a schedule so it had to be cut off)
Other
Applied for Financial Aid?: Yes
State (if domestic applicant): CA
School Type: Public, ~2500 students
Ethnicity: Asian and White
Gender: M
Income Bracket: less than $50,000
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): none
Reflection
Strengths: Stats/Scores
Weaknesses: Too Generic
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: Not too surprised honestly. There wasn’t anything that would make an admissions officer remember my application - my essays weren’t specific enough, my profile wasn’t unique enough. Plus, at a school that filled 1061 of 1925 seats ED, I probably didn’t stand a chance RD.
Where else you are applying or have already applied: UCLA, UCB, Stanford, USC, Harvard, Yale, Columbia, Princeton, Duke
General Comments/Advice/Hindsight: Always start early - take advantage of all your opportunities from the start of high school (don’t wait until it’s too late in the game like I did), spend time and be diligent in your applications, and be prepared for whatever comes. The process is brutal, but hopefully it’ll all pay off. Congrats to everyone who got in!