Note To Roomate

Colleges and Universities A-Z Stanford University
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<p>Hey I have a question about the last short essay. Are you guys actually targeting the essay towards the roomate? or not simply writing about a memory/meaningful experience and what it revealed about you? </p>

<p>Also Could anyone read my first draft and tell me what direction I should take it in or if i should scrap it?</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

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<p>ill read it</p>

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<p>il read ti too</p>

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<p>the only "targeting" that i did was to start with "dear roomie" and there were some parts of the essay that i actually adressed the person w/ a "you". I'll be happy to help w/ your essay</p>

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<p>Thanks for the information!.. Im actually going to scrap my previous essay and try to choose a topic that involves a more unique characteristic and trying to make the essay a little more colloquial....</p>

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<p>I would also like to read it.</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>I'll read it too if you'd like</p>

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<p>I'll read it as well. :)</p>

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<p>i'll read it</p>

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<p>i'll read it :)</p>

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<p>pm me. i'll read it</p>