Nov essay

<p>what essay topic did you guys get? what did you write about?</p>

<p>it was about comparing with others and appreciating what you have. i wroe about the dissatisfaction of blacks in the civil rights. damn i did i bad i think though. i'd be fine with an 8.</p>

<p>the value of established traditions and whether or not they deserve to stick around.</p>

<ol>
<li>Transcendentalist thought in the 1800s (Thoreau...Hawthorne)</li>
<li>MLK Jr.</li>
<li>personal Experience.</li>
</ol>

<p>yeah i got the same as you harrypotter. i wrote about women trying to get the right to vote... blah, stupid, i know.</p>

<p>I had the traditions one, and I argued that old traditions shouldn't always be kept.</p>

<ol>
<li>Civil War</li>
<li>Fahrenheit 451</li>
</ol>

<p>I should've tried to squeeze in one more example, but I just about filled both pages, so whatever..</p>

<p>I made sure I was going to mention the election in my essay, as its been taking ove rmy life in AP Gov.</p>

<p>and I did, well maybe not so exactly</p>

<p>1) Electoral College
2) Totalitarianism/oppressive gov't in middle east (incorporate iraq democracy)</p>

<p>I developed the examples thoroughly though. i had room for a third but it would have looked considerably smaller and wouldnt look good or organized well (i made this mistake on my last sat, and i think was the cause of my 9 essay instead of 10).</p>

<p>yeah...was there anyone who would've honestly said "Oh, yeah, for sure! Old traditions should always be kep exactly the same!!" hahaha</p>

<p>^ I took a slightly different approach than you. Instead of talking about traditions that need to change, I talked about people (transcendentalists and MLK) who tore down established traditions and benefitted humanity as a whole. But I like your approach too :)</p>

<p>Yes, I did this hookem. I thought it would be an interesting spin for the readers.</p>