<p>(first post, yay!) would anyone like to read my NYU essay? My stats for admmissions are borderline, and I'm praying that this will give me that extra push I need to get accepted.</p>
<p>The common app prompt was to indicate a person who has made a significance on you. I'm kind of worried that I answered the actual prompt obliquely by talking about a moment in time.</p>
<p>bump...anyone? I and my professors think it's great but I would like to seek a second opinion.</p>
<p>i'll take a look at it</p>
<p>I used that prompt for Northwestern ED, I've already applied so I'd be happy to critique yours.</p>
<p>mind if i take a look at it? pm it please</p>
<p>PM me.. ill take a loook!</p>
<p>pm me or email me: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>pm me as well!</p>
<p>i'll take a look at it!</p>
<p>pm me too!</p>
<p>Haha. NYU was my top choice until it came down to tuition. Now it's eliminated from my school choices. Lol. But i'll take a look</p>
<p>Sure, Ill read it when I get a chance</p>
<p>if you’re worried about people stealing your essay feel free to email me at my school account... but I'd prefer a pm</p>
<p><a href="mailto:sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu">sxkamboj@ucdavis.edu</a></p>
<p>i'd like to read it</p>