NYU / Mich transfer essays help!

<p>I've got about half of them finished, they're due actually NYU - March, and Mich - Feb, but I really wanna get them polished and hopefully will tip if I'm close... </p>

<p>if anyone can help~! That probably includes reading/critiquing, and giving ideas, that'd be AMAZING!</p>

<p>thanks!!</p>

<p>anyone can help???</p>

<p>I would like to help, PM me if you want.</p>

<p>For the UMich essay, "[1] What would you as an individual bring to our campus community?"</p>

<p>I've got around 298~ words when they said 250~, that seem fair or should I cut a few? I can cut a sentence or so, but I'd rather not.</p>

<p>PM me ur essays
Id be happy to check them
i help my friends all the time</p>

<p>and another word question, I'm at 580 words with prompt, 540 - 560 words without prompt</p>

<p>I'm planning on adding 10-20 more words (aka 1-2 sentences), would that be too long?</p>

<p>500 word limit</p>