<p>NYU is my top choice, and I'm working on the supplement. I'm new to CC, so if I'm posting this in the wrong place, let me know!</p>
<p>The prompt is as follows: "1. Given your NYU campuses of interest - whether they are your primary and alternate home campuses of interest or where you would like to study away while you are a student - where, exactly, would you like to study at NYU - and why? </p>
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<li>Whether you are undecided or you have a definitive plan of study in mind, what are your academic interests and how do you plan to explore them at NYU?" There is a 500 word limit.</li>
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<p>I am entering as an international business major, with hopes to go onto corporate law after. Here's my essay so far, where do I go from here?</p>
<p>"I would love to study in New York City, for a variety of reasons. First, the bustle of a big city is very appealing to me; I was raised as a suburban kid, but was captivated by the way that cities thrive, the way you can walk down the street and see a hundred people that you have never seen before, but can feel connected with them, and have a sense of camaraderie just by living in the same city, a feeling you do not experience in a small town. My goal is to become a corporate lawyer; as New York City is the Big Law hub for the world, as well as being the home to hundreds, if not thousands, of multinational corporations, going to school in a thriving metropolis is the prime unification of both worlds. The opportunities for internships and other job opportunities are unmatched anywhere else in the world, building the foundation of an exemplary law career to come, and the connections that I will make have the possibility to be life-changing. (How do I change the building the foundation of an exemplary law career to come part?)
Academically, I am interested in the way that countries interact, especially with regards to trade and commerce, making the Stern School of Business my school of choice. The ability to learn under names like Nouriel Roubini, Ingo Walter, and many other accomplished economists and professors just makes Stern even more appealing. "</p>
<p>I'm at 243 words, so I have a lot of wiggle room. Thanks!</p>