<p>Question: Why have you chosen Oberlin and what will you contribute?</p>
<p>It's definately not that strong and needs some help. Please only ask for it if you are going to give some sort of critque on it. Thanks.</p>
<p>hey.. I can help u!.. I need someone to critique my Middlebury supplement essay too. Maybe we might exchange thoughts?..</p>
<p>haha i just finished this in one hour...granted i would have spent more time on it if it were my dream school, but it was pretty heartfelt and honest. i wouldn't mind looking at yours...</p>
<p>How long were your essays?</p>