<p>Decision: Deferred</p>
<p>Objective:[ul]
[<em>] SAT I (breakdown): N/A
[</em>] SAT I superscore (breakdown): N/A
[<em>] ACT (breakdown): 33C/35E/32M/30R/33S
[</em>] ACT superscore (breakdown): one-sitting
[<em>] SAT II: 800 Math 2, 780 US History, 740 Biology M
[</em>] Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.7
[<em>] Weighted GPA: N/A
[</em>] Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A
[<em>] AP (place score in parentheses): 5s in US History, Biology; 4 Euro History; 3 AP Calc AB
[</em>] IB (place score in parentheses): N/A
[<em>] Senior Year Course Load: AP US Gov, AP Microecon, AP Art History, AP French Lang, MUN, Journalism, AP Statistics, AP English Lit, AP English Lang (Independent), AP Macroecon (Independent), AP Human Geo (Independent)
[</em>] Number of other EA applicants in your school: 0
[<em>] Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.):[/ul]
[li]AP Scholar with Honor[/li][</em>]Congressional Recognition for cello</p>
<p>Subjective:[ul]
[<em>] Extracurriculars (place leadership in parentheses): Model UN (6 best delegate awards), Cello (principal, quartet/quintet), Gay-Straight Alliance (President), Young Democrats (Secretary), College courses at Georgetown University in sociology and business
[</em>] Job/Work Experience: Business intern at electronics company
[<em>] Volunteer/Community service:[/ul]
[li]NO H8 Campaign (60 hours)[/li][</em>]Reading Tutor in low-income neighborhood (200+ hours)</p>
<p>Writing (Write a brief description and Rate Quality on 1-10 Scale; 10 as Best):[ul]
[<em>] Essays (Include Subjects):[list]
[li] What You Do For Pleasure: going to the gym, explained fractured back-- 8[/li][</em>] Department at MIT: passion for studying business-- 7
[<em>] Personal Strength: sociability-- 6
[</em>] World You Come From: let’s not talk about it-- 6
[<em>] Significant Challenge:being hospitalized in cambodia-- 9
[</em>] Other:[/ul]
[<em>] Teacher Recommendation #1: english teacher, very personal-- 9
[</em>] Teacher Recommendation #2: ap bio teacher, generic-- 7
[<em>] Counselor Rec: personal-- 8
[</em>] Additional Rec: cello teacher, generic-- 6
[<em>] Interview: very long, business student as well-- 9
[</em>] Art Supplement:[/list] cello recordings (contrasting pieces), comprehensive resume, and two teacher recommendations-- 9</p>
<p>Other[ul]
[<em>] Date Submitted App: 10/27
[</em>] State (if domestic applicant): CA
[<em>] School Type: Large public
[</em>] Ethnicity: Asian
[<em>] Gender: Male
[</em>] Income Bracket: 35%
[li] Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.):[/ul] Fractured back (personal struggle), URM–gay</p>[/li]
<p>Reflection[ul]
[<em>] Strengths: Extracurriculars, SAT IIs
[</em>] Weaknesses: Grades, ACT composite could be better
[<em>] Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: My grades suck and our school does not offer enough weighted courses for underclassmen
[</em>] What would you have done differently?:[/ul] Tried harder with grades</p>
<p>Other Factors:
General Comments/Congratulations/Venting/Commiserations, etc: I can’t believe I got deferred; I didn’t think I was even remotely qualified</p>