Decision: Deferred - ED
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): Old SAT 2160 (never took the new one since I studied exclusively for the old SAT)
ACT (breakdown): 33 (35 English, 33 Science, 36 Reading, 28 Math 12 Essays)
SAT II: 740 US History, 710 Biology-E (took it in 9th grade cuz I was a little shit lol), and two others I refused to send
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.9
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): Top 5
AP (place score in parenthesis): World History (4), Euro History (4), US History (5), Calc AB (3)
IB (place score in parenthesis): n/a
Senior Year Course Load: Computer Science/Programming, AP Biology, AP Eng Lit, AP Microeconomics, AP Psychology, Sociology, but I am studying and preparing for the AP French Lang and Culture w/ Listening on my own OUTSIDE of school
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Honestly, I have no major awards, but I have been publishing in a local magazine and journal, I won a presentation award for research, entered and won a few contests for creative writing, and I’ve been published for some poetry, but nothing major (no sarcasm, seriously). Won the Sewanee Book award; have countless school awards for subjects such as art, history, english, science, the works;
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis):
Head Co-Editor for my middle and part of high school writing magazines
Co-Founder of my middle school magazine
VP for JSA (debate and speech; essentially Forensics for those who do it in the states)
work on several novel-length books and outlines and all that accompanying jazz
conduct and do my own personal research on Adderall, human appendages and secretions (don’t ask, it’s filthy work lol), In-vitro/artificial insemination and multiple-babies pregnancy (this was 9th grade material though, so prob v bad tbh)
French Club (participated in fundraisers, made crepes, had fun)
Theater (was an understudy, but had own show)
Book club (fundraised, bought books for other students), President
Job/Work Experience:
Work at Chinese restaurant as a busboy (girl??), cashier and order-deliverer
Volunteer/Community service: around 200-300 hours I guess
volunteered at a Sunday Chinese School as TA
participate in fund-raising walks (Walk for Wishes, etc)
washed and cleaned up after animals in local shelter, and I fostered a cat
babysitting for PTA parents at school
tutor kids in US history, Euro, Art history, world history, and english in my school
taught english to middle school kids in Taiwan (Taichung specifically).
fascinating stuff. (i promise
Summer Activities:
(2016)
went to France for an immersion program for five weeks (got actual grades and letters and assignments and stuff)
wrote, outlined, and finished my third novel (give or take 100k+ words)
did research…
tutored. A lot. I really dislike children now.
participated in a french poetry festival in Sete (i got up and spoke in front of a huge crowd. Was weird).
stressed
entered a few writing competitions (the atlantic, writers digest, john hopkins, some journals and magazines)
stressed some more
(2015)
volunteered as student teacher in taichung
traversed the asian hemisphere
studied for standardized testing
Essays (rating 1-10, details): I would give mine a solid 9. I wrote about some weird-ass stuff, but it was succinct and rather creative. To be more specific, I wrote about my hard move from city to island, my difficulty with independence (anxiety, and my ability to not control everything) tied with my faith TRANSLATED through my struggle with driving, as well as my endless lurvveeeeee of writing.
weird stuff gyals
Recommendations (rating 1-10, details): read below
Teacher Rec #1: WAIVED RIGHT TO READ (Biology/Anatomy teacher)
Teacher Rec #2: WAIVED RIGHT TO READ
Counselor Rec: ditto for the above
Additional Rec: got one from my french tutor, BUT WAIVED RIGHT TO READ
Interview: 5/10 (I f*ked up bad ok; I was pretty bland, but I made an impression. A bad one). I’m still sighing over this one. It lasted barely 30 minutes and although he said he would write me a good rec, I wasn’t convinced.
However, if I had to give a rating, maybe a 7 to 10?
Other:
Applied for Financial Aid?: yah man
Intended Major: English (creative writing) or French lang & lit
State (if domestic applicant): US Virgin Islands
Country (if international applicant): some consider us international, but evidently we are not - hence the US part.
School Type: private, preparatory school
Ethnicity: Asian (Chinese)
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: 30,000 - 35,000 (if you can’t tell, I’m a brokeass ho). both parents are WAITERS (i, too, am a waiter. On occasion).
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): I’m broke; I had a traumatic move from NY to Virgin Islands (was not mentally or socially ready) after sophomore year; study outside of school for French; unique major; from the USVI; do research outside of school too…?; top 5 in grade??? who actually knows though ok
Reflection:
Strengths: creative writing + french; traumatic move; i’m really, really broke; from USVI (island gyal); wrote a few novels
Weaknesses: GPA; average standardized tests; not too many summer activities
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: BECAUSE I WASN’T GOOD ENOUGH OK. (jk, but honestly it was crushing reading that letter). probs cuz my GPA and summer activities were rather…lacking.
Where else were you accepted/deferred/rejected: this is my first letter, so to say I’m down is a bit of an understatement. Just a bit, though. But I did apply EA to UChicago, and regular to a boatload of others (Swarthmore, Williams, Michigan, Amherst, NYU, Vanderbilt, etc…)
General Comments: If you couldn’t tell by the end, I’m a pretty sarcastic little sh!t. However, I am really* crushed, but I want to say that no matter what, we did our best, polished ourselves to a blinding sheen; so even though we weren’t accepted (yet, hopefully), we still got a chance.
Also - live long and prosper mellon
*since expletives aren’t allowed, just think of every possible one you know, and then think of a few more. If you’re finished, search online and continue.