**Decision: Waitlisted **
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown M/CR/W/Essay): 1570 (800/770/17) Didn’t submit
SAT I superscore (breakdown M/CR/W/Essay): Only took once
ACT (breakdown): 36
ACT superscore (breakdown): Only took once
SAT II (subject, score): Math II – 800; Chemistry – 800; US History – 790; Biology E - 730
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0
Weighted GPA: 7.72
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): ~5/~450
AP (place score in parentheses): Calculus BC (5), Psychology (5), Chemistry (4), Biology (4), Physics 1 (5), US History (5), Environmental Science (4), Statistics (5), European History (5), Calculus AB (5), English Language and Composition (5)
IB (place score in parentheses): Not taken until end of year
Senior Year Course Load: IB Math HL, IB Chem HL, IB English HL, IB Physics SL, IB French SL, IB History SL
Number of other applicants in your school: 2
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel, etc.): Siemens Competition Semifinalist, 2xNational Chemistry Olympiad Qualifier, 3xAIME Qualifier
Common Awards (AP Scholar, honor roll, NM things, etc.): NM Finalist, National AP Scholar, US Presidential Scholar Candidate, Utah Math Olympiad 3rd Place (10), Utah State Math Contest 3rd Place (9), Science Olympiad Medals (Local & State level) (9-12)
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (name, grade levels, leadership, description): eSports Club (9-12, secretary), FBLA (10-12, vice president), Math Club (10-12), Mathcounts Mentoring (10), State Math Team (9-12), Piano (9-10), Tennis (9-12), NHS (12)
Job/Work Experience: Summer research internship at cancer center (2017), worked on optimizing cancer treatment with radiation therapy through mathematical modeling – this is what got me semifinalist in Siemens Competition
Volunteer/Community Service: VA Hospital (10), Science Museum (11-12)
Summer Experience: Summer camps on math, FBLA national competition, volunteering,
Writing (Subject, 1-10 rating, details):
Essays: 8/10 Overall
Experiences in STEM: 8/10 – Pretty straight forward and to the point about competitive mathematics, chemistry tutoring, and my research internship
How you have fun: 9/10 – Pretty quirky essay on playing Dungeons and Dragons with friends
Honor code: 5/10 – Oh god this is probably what killed my essays. Now that I look back on it, it was a super cringey essay about how everyone at my lunch table spread rumors about this one couple and how I decided to take their side.
Diversity: 6/10 – Talke about founding eSports club with friends, but maybe not the best topic since negative stigma of video games still exist
Why Caltech: 8/10 – I thought this was pretty good when I wrote it, talked about moving a lot and seeking a close-knit, cooperative community in Caltech
CommonApp: 10/10 – Result of 2 rewrites and 15ish drafts, related my drooping eyelid mismatching to me constant moving around.
Other (teacher’s subject, 1-10 rating, details):
Teacher Recommendation #1: 10/10 - English teacher who absolutely adored me junior year and says positive things about me to underclassmen.
Teacher Recommendation #2: 9/10 – I have a really good relationship with every single one of my math teachers since math is my favorite class in school, not to mention I compete in Mu Alpha Theta’s Calculus Team of which my math teacher is a sponsor.
Counselor Rec: 6/10 – Large public school, so each of us filled out a form that our counselor used to write a LOR from.
Additional Info/Rec: 8/10 – My summer research internship mentor who I discussed research with every day.
Supplement: NA
Other
Date Submitted App: 01/03/2018
U.S. State/Territory or Country: Florida
School Type: Large public, ~2,000 students in total
Ethnicity: Asian (Chinese)
Gender: Male
Income Bracket Range: ~$150,000
Hooks (URM, first generation, recruited athelete, development): None (unless first generation immigrant counts lol)
Reflection
Strengths: I had all of the basic requirements for a student applying for STEM major at top universities – research, STEM competitions, STEM related volunteering, ECs, etc.
Weaknesses: I moved from Utah to Florida between sophomore and junior year, and as a result could not secure top leadership positions at my new school (would’ve been president of Math and Science Olympiad club at my old school if I had stayed). Also, moving dropped my class rank from predicted valedictorian to top 10. Most importantly, though, I just wasn’t good enough to go really far into STEM competitions, like making USAMO or qualifying for summer camp from National Chemistry Olympiad.
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: See above
What would you have done differently?: Definitely focused more on STEM competitions to see if I could’ve gone one step further in each of them that I competed in.
Where else did you apply? Georgia Tech (accepted), Harvard (deferred then rejected), UF (accepted w/honors), UC Berkeley (accepted), Rice (waitlisted), WashU (waitlisted), Duke (rejected), Northwestern (waitlisted), MIT (rejected), UChicago (waitlisted), Princeton (rejected), Brown (rejected), Columbia (rejected), Yale (rejected), Johns Hopkins (accepted w/scholarship), Stanford (rejected), Cornell (waitlistd), Caltech (waitlisted), UPenn (waitlisted)
**Other Factors: **
NA
General Comments & Advice:
If you’re going into STEM go for high achievements in STEM competitions while also making sure you have top leadership positions (ie president) in order to have a chance at HYPSM schools. Of course, don’t be so focused on prestige like I was because there are plenty of other schools out there that will be a good fit for you!