Accepted: Rider University (EA, November), Stetson University (Rolling, November), Quinnipiac University (RD, December), University of North Carolina Wilmington (EA, January), Hofstra University (RD after deferral, February), University of Pittsburgh - Johnstown campus (Rolling, February)
Rejected: Clark University (EA, December), Fordham University (EA, December), Northeastern University (EA, December), University of Massachusetts Amherst (EA, January), University of Pittsburgh (Rolling, February), Bentley University (RD after deferral, March), Syracuse University (RD, April), Binghamton University (RD after deferral, April)
Attending: UNC Wilmington
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2000 (660 CR, 550 M, 790 W)
ACT (breakdown): N/A
SAT Subject Tests (place score in parentheses): N/A
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 2.71
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): School does not rank, but I apparently will finish in the bottom 40% GPA-wise…
AP (place score in parentheses): N/A
IB (place score in parentheses): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: AP Euro, Environmental Science, Business Principles + Management (2nd semester), English IV, Prob and Stat (1st semester), Discrete Math (2nd semester)
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): N/A
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parentheses): Memorial candlelight vigil/Facebook page in honor of late schoolmate (organizer/administrator), Young Democrats Club, Gifts of Gold Club, Helping Hands Club, Smiles for Seniors Club
Job/Work Experience: None
Volunteer/Community Service: None
Summer Activities: None
Essays: 8.5/10. My essay was about problems at home during sophomore year that no one could have had the foresight to comprehend: eviction. I started in July and had to revise multiple times before applying to schools in August. Teachers in my school who reviewed it said it was good.
Teacher Recommendations: PreCalc teacher wrote one, English III teacher wrote another. I did not have them read to me, therefore could not comment.
Counselor Rec: This one I had read to me. She detailed how it took me two full years of high school to really mature, and that my grades took a hit due to my family losing their home. She also stated how I was ready for the collegiate level. Overall, 9.5/10
Additional Rec:
Interview: I had two. The first one was with my Stetson recruiter over the phone. It was basically me just asking him questions about the school.
The second one was with my Hofstra regional officer, which was pleasant.
Other
State (if domestic applicant): New Jersey
Country (if international applicant):
School Type: Public (one of the top schools in the nation)
Ethnicity: African-American
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: 40,000-59,999
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): URM, experienced severe turbulence during high school years
Reflection
Strengths: My SAT score was my biggest strength on paper, and I definitely would not have gotten into UNCW if it wasn’t as high. However, I feel that my essay was just as important, as I detailed the struggles of homeless life.
Weaknesses: Definitely my GPA, as well as the fact that I hadn’t taken any AP classes before senior year.
Why you think you were accepted/deferred/rejected: I was accepted to where I was because I was adjudged to be a good fit for those schools. The converse happened for the schools that rejected me.
Where else you are applying or have already applied: every school is already listed
Any Scholarships or Honors programs? I got scholarships at every school besides where I will be attending and Pitt-Johnstown. No honors programs, however.
General Comments/Advice/Hindsight: I was enamored with the idea of going to school in the state of Massachusetts, yet was rejected from every school I applied to in that state. Particularly, I loved UMass Amherst for its nationally-ranked business school, college town atmosphere, and well-praised campus food. However, after applying on August 1st, they took until LATE January to reply with a denial which I was prepared for. But before that, I got into UNCW, which was a school I had always been interested in, but had put on the back burner behind the likes of UMass, Northeastern, Syracuse etc. I’ll always remember jumping out of bed that day when I was sick from school, fist pumping, and yelling “EFF YES!!!” when I got the text from my dad. I then had to claw, fight, and scrap to prove go my parents that I was ready to go nine hours away. In the end, I’m going to the school that’s the best possible fit for me, and a school that also sees my potential as a student AND a human being. It also doesn’t hurt that UNCW is near the beach and has a great business school my advice to the HS Class of 2016 and beyond is to NEVER get super hung up on one school, and to ALWAYS believe in yourself.