<p>[ size=+2][ color=red][ b]Decision: Rejected[ /b][ /color][ /size]</p>
<p>[ b]College and Program: SMG[ /b]
[ b]Stats:[ /b][ list]
[ *]SAT I (by section): 2120 CR: 660 M:710 W:750
[ *]SAT IIs: Math: 760 Chinese: 800
[ *]APs: English Lang and Lit, APUSH, Psych, Chinese
[ *]GPA (UW, W): 3.61 (Terrible freshman and sophomore year but with sharp upward curve)
[ *]Rank: top 30%
[ *]Other stats:
[ /list][ b]Subjective:[ /b][ list]
[ *]ECs listed on app:
Helped American sunglasses company BluBlocker (the sunglasses the dudes wore in HANGOVER) enter the Chinese market by organizing people and selling their sunglasses at the largest mall in Shanghai. In return, we used 100% of the profit to fund cataracts surgeries for the elderly poor. We raised approximately $13000 one summer.
Co-founder and editor in chief of a student run psychology website
Only junior volunteer/assistant researcher at the largest psychiatric hospital in Shanghai
Director and Anchor of School Media Department
President of Class
Organized students to provide counseling services on AP, SAT, colleges that my highschool failed to provide
Varsity swimming team and football team
[ *]Job/Work Experience:
Marketing and PR at a fast growing startup company
Marketing at a college consulting company
Finished a 3000 word entrepreneurial business plan of my own
Marketing at a listed company
[ *]Essays (subject and responses): How I did the BluBlocker project. VERY well polished and executed in terms of emotion, achievement, and narration. However, now I feel like it lacked personality. I should have wrote about my unique upbringing instead of playing it safe and trying to show off my ability.
Supplement was very well written and thoroughly researched to which classes I would like to take and how I thought of the research direction of a specific department.
[ *]Teacher Recs: AP Eng teacher and AP Psych teacher. Very solid.
[ *]Counselor Rec: Very solid, talked about my growth since my sophomore year.
[ *]Applied on (EA?): RD
[ *]Hook (if any): Bi-cultutal background
[ /list][ b]Location/Person:[ /b][ list]
[ *]State or Country: From NY, but lived in China for the past 10 years.
[ *]School Type: Public
[ *]Ethnicity: Asian
[ *]Gender: Male
[ /list][ b]General Comments/Congratulations/Venting/Commiserations, etc:
A bit surprised and sad. My main failure was my GPA and judging from the competitiveness, I guess my ECs and essay cant make up for a poor freshman and sophomore year. Good luck to everyone! :-)</p>