Decision: Accepted
Trinity College of Arts and Sciences
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): N/A
ACT: 33C (34E, 36M, 32R, 30S)
SAT II: Math II 770, Bio E 730
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.72 (My 9th grade GPA was considerably low compared to my GPA in 10th and 11th grade. I raised it from a 3.3 to a 3.9)
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): N/A (My class size is 16 students.)
AP (place score in parenthesis): My school does not offer AP courses. BC Calculus 4 with AB Subscore 5 (I self-studied for the exam in 11th grade. I took my first calculus course during that same year.)
IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: Two college level courses completed during the summer (Linear Algebra and Differential Calculus of Several Variables and Introduction to Probability and Statistics for Engineers), Discrete Math, Advanced Physics, English, US History (I attend a Waldorf school, so I take seminars called “main lessons” that typically last 3-4 weeks (e.g. Russian literature). My transcript is very long…
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Published in school magazine (poems, short stories, and essays) since 10th grade, awarded student athlete award since 10th grade. These are all internal awards (i.e. rewarded within my school).
Subjective:
Extracurriculars (place leadership in parenthesis): Computer science club (co-founder), debate club (co-founder), literary club (editor of school magazine), social inclusion (mentored younger students), drama club, varsity soccer team, varsity basketball team, self-studying (edX, OCW, and Coursera), fine arts, admissions ambassador (spoke in panels and open houses)
Job/Work Experience: Software Developer & Engineering Intern at Talkpoint, a PGi Company, and Public Relations Intern at Porter Novelli
Volunteer/Community service: Assisted high school learning specialist (20 hrs), Lenox Hill Neighborhood House (22 hrs), Camphill Movement (70 hrs)
Summer Activities: 2015 Stanford Summer College for High School Students (summer before senior year)
Essays: Common App. (9/10) discussed my interests in art and technology, and how I really want to make a difference in the world. Why Duke (8/10) wrote about how I am looking for a “home” that is both a research institution and a liberal arts school, where students care about the theory as much as the applications and integrate their studies together. Optional Essay (10/10) discussed how my school (a Waldorf school) has shaped me and made me really care for my school community. I also connected my school’s philosophy with my own academic experiences.
Teacher Recommendation: Math teacher and advisor (10/10) – he wrote a very long recommendation (1.5 pages, single-spaced, and a small font size) that was incredibly thoughtful. I did not get to read it, but my biology teacher told me that seemed as if he was applying, himself. Biology teacher (9/10) – she talked about how I have integrated artwork into my coursework, and she praised my work ethic. She also told me that she wrote six drafts, trying to make it perfect!
Counselor Rec: 9/10 – She talked about my self-study for BC Calculus. I met with her frequently.
Additional Rec: Soccer coach (9/10) – he talked about how I work harder than anyone on the field. This has been my approach to anything I attempt.
Interview: (8/10) Very informal, and I discussed my interests and why I really wanted to go to Duke. I told her that Duke students actually looked happy to be there, and I would prefer collaboration over competition any day.
Other
State (if domestic applicant): New York
Country (if international applicant):
Intended major(s): Computer Science & Economics (or Mathematics)
School Type: Waldorf School (Private school)
Ethnicity: White
Gender: Male
Income Bracket: > 250,000
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): Waldorf education. I submitted an arts portfolio and made a website in WordPress to showcase my artwork, writing, designs (e.g. bridge), and resumes, to the admissions staff. I really tried to represent my school in this website. I also completed my resumes in LaTeX, so they were really well designed.
Reflection: I think that you really just need to be yourself and discuss why YOU could make a difference on campus, but more importantly in the world. If you think about it, the school is investing in you. Your job is to give them a return on investment.
Strengths: Mathematics, computer science (all self-study and my school does not offer any program for this discipline), artwork, discipline and work ethic, good test scores
Weaknesses: Coming from an unknown school in terms of students applying to Duke. School does not offer AP courses. Low GPA.
Why you think you were accepted: I discussed both my academic and non-academic interests, and how together they can allow me to really do something extraordinary.
General Comments:
Just be yourself and do what you love to do.