Official May Sat Writing and Essay Thread

<p>Tyler: I agree</p>

<p>Thats what I put as well. On the bird question was "than" the correct answer? Also, was there no error on the war chariot one?</p>

<p>I put "than," and I think so.</p>

<p>i put "including forcing" too, so i guess i had that section
really dont remember the amino acid one tho</p>

<p>I couldn't spot an error in the war chariot one. And I got "than" for the bird one too.</p>

<p>The chariot one was tough i thought, i left it blank.</p>

<p>Because their flight was missed, the bride's parents...</p>

<p>OR</p>

<p>Because the bride's parents missed their flight, they had to...</p>

<p>I put the former.</p>

<p>It's the latter</p>

<p>beanies, that is clear passive voice verus active voice. It is the latter.</p>

<p>I put Because...they had to...</p>

<p>beanies520 i put down the second one, it is rare that the noun is not addressed in the beginning.</p>

<p>Wouldnt it have to be "Because they missed their flight, the bride's parents" in that case?</p>

<p>What did you guys put on the improving paragraph camp one? I put "since".</p>

<p>Yes... ten characters.</p>

<p>What did you guys have for the Jane Eyre one? I think I had the 'including', though it kind of threw me.</p>

<p>beaunies 520 no the noun is usually addressed first so it would be "because the bride's parents missed their flight, they..." this is how i would talk in real life</p>

<p>I only filled out about half of the second page of the essay. Is that bad? Also, could anyone predict my score if I got an 8 essay and 1 wrong on the writing.</p>

<p>i did too, i think that that topic didnt warrant a lot of writing, but i'm pretty sure that my grammar/spelling was horrible as i had no time to look it over.</p>

<p>how bout the one with I found something wandering in the something</p>

<p>was the error on wandering or was it no error</p>

<p>I put no error</p>

<p>:S for the last question i put "...;thus being a complete.."</p>