Decision: ACCEPTED!!! still can't believe it
[Objective]
SAT I: took it 3 times, highest score was 1400 (math- 690, reading- 710)
ACT: took it twice, 1st score- 26, 2nd score- 30
SAT II: Biology/M- 680, Math 1- 660 (I only sent in my score for biology)
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 4.0/4.0 Weighted: 4.7/4.0
Rank: #1 out of a class size of 386
AP: World History, Spanish Language, US History, English Literature, Biology (all 3’s), and Environmental Science (4)
Senior AP Course-load: Calculus AB, Statistics, English Language, Psychology
Major Awards: National AP Scholar
Small Awards: 2nd place in my school's creative writing contest, honor roll?; to be honest, my school didn't give many awards
[Subjective]
Extracurriculars:
-President and Founder of school’s Baile Folklorico Club (4 years)
-Secretary for Community Service Club (1 year)
-Member of California Scholastic Federation CSF Club (1 year)
-Tennis (2 years)
-Participated in Math Competition at our local community college (4 years)
Work Experience (paid): worked as a maintenance worker for a realty company during the summer before my junior year in high school
Volunteer/Community Service:
-10 hours thru the community service club at my school
-5 hours volunteering for a local organization at a marathon
-? hours volunteering as a part-time dance instructor for the baile folklorico club I founded at my school
Summer Activities:
Before Junior Year- worked as a maintenance worker, also included in my application that I hung out with friends and took care of family
Before Senior Year- attended the California State Summer School for Mathematics and Science (COSMOS) at UC Davis to study biomedical sciences, the rest of the summer I studied for standardized test via Khan Academy and started learning French
Essays:
Common App (10/10): rewrote my essay like 5 times, made sure it perfectly represented me and was unique; talked about my childhood, reasons why I founded the Baile Folklorico Club at my high school, and how my perception on life changed; talked about how my club impacted my community in a positive way and how we performed in our town’s parades, cook-offs, festivals, etc. I basically highlighted my leadership skills and my cultural passion for dancing folklorico.
Supplements (9/10): for the main supplemental essay, I came up with my own prompt (using a quote from a favorite author…), in that essay I talked about my background and how I matured from prejudice and wanted to break stereotypes, it led into the quote I used beautifully and creatively; in another essay, I talked about the summer program I attended and how that month-long experience invigorated my love for science, also talked about how I almost died from appendicitis my 8th grade year which sparked my interest in the medical field; in another essay, i just briefly talked about my summers.
Recommendations:
Teacher 1 Rec (9/10) - from my science teacher of 2 years, she knows me well and talked about how I got along well with others and how she admired my work ethics
Teacher 2 Rec (8/10)- from my math teacher of 2 years, also knows me very well but had less time to write a recommendation so I don’t think it is as strong as the first teacher
Counselor Rec (10/10)- I’m pretty close to my counselor, he summed up my high school career beautifully and talked about who I am as a person and how I’ve thrived in my school/community
Interview- about 1 hr 20 minutes, I was very nervous but I gradually opened up to my interviewer and the conversation took off (phone interview), he was in his mid 40s, white male, very kind and insightful
Applied for Financial Aid- Yes
Intended Major- Molecular Biology, or Ecology and Evolutionary Biology
State-California
School Type- Large public high school from a small/poor county in southern california
Ethnicity- Hispanic/ Mexican
Gender- Female
Income Bracket: 40k for a family of 6, low-income
Hooks: URM (under-represented minority), first-generation, low-income, oldest of 4 children so I had to help my mom raise my siblings, mom got pregnant with me at 17 and her boyfriend abandoned the both of us so as a child I didn't have a father figure, etc.
REFLECTION
Strengths: valedictorian of my school, leader in my community/school, unique story, perfect grades
Weaknesses: relatively low standardized test scores (for the Ivies)
Why you think you were accepted: my essays, grades, recommendations, and personality
Rejected from: Dartmouth, Cornell, and Stanford
Waitlisted at: Columbia, Brown, UPENN, University of Chicago, and Harvard
Accepted to: Cal State Long Beach, Cal Poly San Luis Obispo, UC Davis, UC San Diego, UCLA, UC Berkeley, and Princeton University
received fee waivers to apply, started all applications about 2 weeks before the deadline
Suggestions/ Advice:
-take time on your essays, do NOT rush your applications
-research the schools you’re applying to so when it’s time to do their supplements, you can easily explain why their school is right for you
-please do NOT over-prepare for your interviews, my Harvard interviewer liked the fact that I was honest and humble with my responses, don’t brag and don’t memorize your responses, she said she likes people who aren’t very “practiced” (her own words)
-don’t stress out, it’s unhealthy and will show through your essays if you’re not careful enough
-please don’t let anyone stop you from applying to certain schools, even if you think they’re out of your “reach”; it doesn’t hurt to try
Good luck to all those applying next year! I hope you guys get into your dream schools!