Decision: Accepted
Objective:
SAT I (breakdown): 2330 (CR - 790, M - 740, W - 800) (one sitting)
ACT: N/A
SAT II: Math II - 750, Chemistry - 760, US History - 740
Unweighted GPA (out of 4.0): 3.809 (Weighted: 4.409)
Rank (percentile if rank is unavailable): 20/649 (Top 3%)
AP (place score in parenthesis): AP World History (3), AP Calculus AB (3), AP Physics (3), AP European History (4), AP Calculus BC (4), AP Calculus BC - AB subscore (4), AP Chemistry (4), AP US History (5), AP Psychology (5), AP English Language (5), AP Human Geography (4)
IB (place score in parenthesis): N/A
Senior Year Course Load: AP Statistics, AP Biology, AP English Literature, AP US Government and Politics, AP Macroeconomics, AP Computer Science, AP French
Major Awards (USAMO, Intel etc.): Presidential Volunteer Service Award, National Merit Finalist
Subjective:
Extracurriculars: A Youth Ambassador for my city, a board member of my community’s council, founder of a volunteer organization for foster care children, President of my school’s American Cancer Society chapter, Youth Chair of my region’s Relay for Life, Captain of my school’s Mock Trial team, Captain of my school’s tennis team, California Youth Ambassador.
Job/Work Experience: Waitress at my parent’s restaurant.
Volunteer/Community service: Interned for a congressman and a legal non-profit for children’s rights, tennis coach for the Special Olympics, Obama 2012 campaign volunteer, Garcetti 2012 campaign volunteer.
Summer Activities: Global Scholar program at American University, E12 Excellence in Public Service program, Fourth Estate Leadership Summit, Model United Nations, Costa Rica service trip, Junior Counselor at a day camp.
Essays: My Common App essay was pretty unique, talking about how my life unfolded with audio books. I would give it an 8 at worst. My Wellesley supp was very focused on what specific things of Wellesley I wanted to experience, using the Wellesley 100 as a platform to talk about other things. I chose #100 and #37, the pluralistic, polyphonic, unclassifiable mass of humanity that is the student body of Wellesley and Hillary Rodham Clinton, respectively. I also used these to talk about my own endeavors accomplishments, but only those not thoroughly explained through my application. I’m not exactly sure how to rank this one, but it’s maybe around 8 or 9.
Teacher Recommendation: I asked my English/Psychology teacher and my Science/Stat teacher for recommendations. English teacher - 7/10. I saw her rec, and it did a good job describing me in her classroom and had some nice tidbits about my personality. Science teacher - 10/10. His rec was gold. He really went into depth about my participation in class, the effort I put into my studies, and my overall genuine personality. It was great.
Counselor Rec: 6/10. It wasn’t bad, per se, but it was very generic. It did include some of my accomplishments, however, so I give it a 6.
Additional Rec: N/A
Interview: N/A
Other
State (if domestic applicant): CA
Country (if international applicant): N/A
School Type: Public Magnet
Ethnicity: Asian-American
Gender: Female
Income Bracket: ~$60K
Hooks (URM, first generation college, etc.): First generation
Reflection
Strengths: Essays, extracurriculars, and objective scores. Focus on political science/government, but with a personal touch of activities such as children’s rights organizations and cancer advocacy. I also had other awards/honors that weren’t necessarily “major,” such as AP Scholar with Distinction, George Eastman Young Leaders Award, City of LA Special Recognition Award.
Weaknesses: Possibly my counselor rec. And although I really loved my Wellesley supp, it was a bit generic sometimes.
Why you think you were accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Stats and solid subjective app.
Where else were you accepted/waitlisted/rejected: Accepted to UC Davis, UC Irvine, UC San Diego, UCLA, UC Berkeley, Tufts, Wesleyan University, Boston College. Waitlisted to Swarthmore, Barnard. Rejected from Duke, Johns Hopkins, Georgetown, Stanford, Amherst.
General Comments: I hope that this helps someone! The college process was definitely stressful, but all you need is strength and focus (and maybe sometimes some magic).