<p>So, I wrote about my tonsils... um, yeah.</p>
<p>It's the first time I sat down and banged something out. Please, help me out. I would appreciate it greatly. It's my first college essay and I need to know if I'm moving in the right direction. I'll PM it to you. </p>
<p>thanks in advance</p>
<p>sure. il give it a look</p>
<p>I’ll read yours if you read mine! (please? 
)</p>
<p>I’ll exchange essays with you.</p>
<p>sure.. i’ll critique it.</p>
<p>Sure ill look at it </p>
<p>im in AP Lit and Language and Composition for a reason. As well as an english tutor. </p>
<p>Im kind of harsh though :)</p>
<p>I’ll take a look at it.</p>
<p>PM me though</p>